Well done - some impressive work here considering the stage of the course that we are at. Excellent white balance Some good framing, partic your close up work where you fill the frame. You obey all 3 editing continuity rules. It is also ambitious, as with the first section as a dream sequence.
To improve. Framing - some of your medium shots have the top of head out of frame. This does not work. It is fine with real close up work, but not in medium framed work. Tripod was not used on the CU of door and the shot wobbles as a result - a shame. Always use Tripods unless you have real reason not to. You MOA of the door opening has too much of a time delay. Holly opens door at pace, and then you have a reverse shot to Alex and then on return to Holly, she is still opening door. Watch again to see the error.
A very good effort - just be careful in how you frame shots in MCU or MS. bring the tripod down a bit to ensure all the subject is in frame.
Well done - some impressive work here considering the stage of the course that we are at.
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Some good framing, partic your close up work where you fill the frame.
You obey all 3 editing continuity rules.
It is also ambitious, as with the first section as a dream sequence.
To improve.
Framing - some of your medium shots have the top of head out of frame. This does not work. It is fine with real close up work, but not in medium framed work.
Tripod was not used on the CU of door and the shot wobbles as a result - a shame. Always use Tripods unless you have real reason not to.
You MOA of the door opening has too much of a time delay. Holly opens door at pace, and then you have a reverse shot to Alex and then on return to Holly, she is still opening door. Watch again to see the error.
A very good effort - just be careful in how you frame shots in MCU or MS. bring the tripod down a bit to ensure all the subject is in frame.
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